Friday 25 August 2017

Literacy, Reflections, w5t3, free writting

5 comments:

  1. Maya, I like the visuals, but next time you could write more to explain and tell the reader about the pictures.

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  2. Hey Maya!
    I liked your slide, maybe next time you could explain why you made it and what it is? Great picture though.
    Thanks!
    From Hannah
    Yaldhurst Model School

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    1. Kia Ora Hannah Thanks for the nice comment and next time i will ex plane why I did this

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  3. Hi my name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School and I really like this post Maya. You remind me of my old friend also called Maya. I thought your post was good because it had lot's of good photos. I think you should make this slideshow less wide because it covers up some details on the side that people can read. I'm just wondering why you had to or just why did you made this.

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  4. Kia Ora Maya it's Madisyn here your friend!.I like your post about me and you.Next time you could talk about the pictures.
    From Madisyn

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