Adrenalin forest
as I walk down the sharp stone driveway I am fizzy with energy I jump on Gracie back and we run down the drive some more and then we come across two instructors handing us our harnesses. As we start practicing on this little zip line I get too excited and get stuck " oh no. " 30 minutes later " We are on stage 3a now because we skipped stage 2 because it was a big line up I look down on the stage we are doing and I scream of fear and I get my harness all seat up and clicked on. I put my hands on the zip line and push off I scream the whole way across and " smash " I go into the green mat. And Gracie decides to pull the rope back so I'm just hanging in the air for a few seconds
. as I come down the ladder I have the shivers. as I hop off the ladder I see Gracie zip line across I'm in tears of laughter and so is she ( she was screaming a bit ). We head over to level 3b first off we had to climb through a tangle of rope and then a zigzag wood corse and much much more. Then we come across our last course for the day big steep long zip line I grab my harness hook it up to put my zip line handle on and off I go I'm going so fast and speedy I just hit the green mat and I'm laughing my lungs out well we have to go now bye.
Wow Maya! What an amazing piece of writing. You have explained really well what you did on camp. Were you scared as you did it? I would have been. Maybe next time you could get a buddy to proofread your work just to check for your silly mistakes.
ReplyDeleteHey Maya, great descriptive piece of writing about our time at the Adrenalin Forest. Just remember to check your work before you post it. We will work on varying your sentences for next time.
ReplyDeleteHi Maya I think the picture you posted on your blog was absolutely amazing and I like the one with the tightrope walking to a tree and I really like how you made like an adventure journal page but maybe you should try making the words bigger and in a darker shade of color.
ReplyDeleteHi Maya my name is Ashlee from Belfast school, I like the way that you laid it out. I like the one with the tightrope walking on the tree. maybe next time you could do more picture.
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