Hi Maya, you have written a very detailed description of me. I especially like how you have described my hais as mousey brown with light layers. Next time perhaps just put a screen shot of your favourite section of your writing on your blog. Then you can include a link to the rest of your writing for those people who want to read more as this writing is very difficult to read on here as it is tiny. Luckily I have good eyesight! Well done, Mrs P
Kia Ora Maya its Madisyn here from Grey Main school.I like how you have lots of detail about about Mrs Prendergast. Next time you could make the words bigger and put more full stops in. From Madisyn
Hi Maya, you have written a very detailed description of me. I especially like how you have described my hais as mousey brown with light layers. Next time perhaps just put a screen shot of your favourite section of your writing on your blog. Then you can include a link to the rest of your writing for those people who want to read more as this writing is very difficult to read on here as it is tiny. Luckily I have good eyesight! Well done, Mrs P
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ReplyDeleteI really like how you described Mrs P,
I could imagine in my mind what she looked like
Thanks Lucy from Yaldhurst Model School..
Kia Ora Maya its Madisyn here from Grey Main school.I like how you have lots of detail about about Mrs Prendergast. Next time you could make the words bigger and put more full stops in.
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