Friday 17 March 2017

Literacy reflection T1 W7

This week in literacy we have been writing paragraphs about camp using the 5W's and a H.  We had to write about our favourite activity.
My favourite camp activity was building the sand sculptures at Tauranga bay. Here is a picture of my writing.






1 comment:

  1. Hi my name is Mia and I am from Yaldhurst school and I like this peice of writing because it is colourful and it seems like you really enjoyed it.
    Next time why don't you add a background.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.