Friday 16 June 2017

literacy w7 term 2 reflections

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  1. Hi Maya, you have written a very detailed description of me. I especially like how you have described my hais as mousey brown with light layers. Next time perhaps just put a screen shot of your favourite section of your writing on your blog. Then you can include a link to the rest of your writing for those people who want to read more as this writing is very difficult to read on here as it is tiny. Luckily I have good eyesight! Well done, Mrs P

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  2. Hey Maya!!
    I really like how you described Mrs P,
    I could imagine in my mind what she looked like
    Thanks Lucy from Yaldhurst Model School..

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.